Monday, July 11, 2016

Tim and Sharon Creative Writing Working Draft

Tim & Sharon


Hope Wilson
July 2016



Tim - Sharon's fiancé  35
Aunt Ethel - Sharon & Lisa"s Aunt 75
Sharon - Lisa"s sister 35
Tj -Lisa's son  12
Lisa -Sharon's sister 27
Bob- Lisa's boy friend 27


Place South Carolina
Time now


                                                         We are Family


Everyone is at Sharon's  house waiting for the Dr. to call with the test results concerning TJ biological father. They decided to spend the weekend there nto introduce TJ to his new found family.




                                                                 Sharon
Lisa hates me because I'm happy. I know mom and dad are rolling over in their grave.


                                                                   Tim
I wish I can do something to change this situation .


                                                                  Sharon
No baby we good we just have to take care of Jr. first


                                                                  Aunt Ethel
I gave the doctor my cell number. I already explained everything to Tj. My girlfriend will be dropping him off from camp soon.


                                                                  Sharon
ARRR Poor thing I hate putting him through all of this.


                                                               Aunt Ethel
No no sweetie it's good that you brought this to my attention as soon as you were aware. So Lisa can be the only bad guy.


                                                                  Tim
If I knew I had a son I would had contacted him immediately.


                                                               Aunt Ethel
As soon as Lisa turned 18 she should had contacted him and told you guys about him.  I didn't want to force her hand and I promised your parents I will not tell anyone unless it was an emergency. He is really such a well mannered child. He is a pleasure to have around.


                                                                  Sharon
Were mom and dad ok with her contacting him?


                                                              Aunt  Ethel
No but I'm your Aunt Ethel I always have you girls back. Who brought you guys bras and cell phones after told not to by your mom. It was our little secret right? ( Aunt Ethel winks!) Lisa could had visited when ever she wanted for as long as she wanted and your mom would had never known. And I am sure guys would had kept her secret.


                                                                  Sharon
I don't think Lisa wants a son. I mean she knows she can't raise a child by herself The only reason she told us about him is  to hurt me and she did. She really did .


                                                                    Tim
Baby don't look at it like that. Whether he's my son or my nephew he is a blessing to this family.


                                                                Sharon
That's my guy ! Aunt Ethel did I pick a great guy or what?


                                                             Aunt Ethel
Sweetie you can't make a bad decision if you tried


The phone rings and Sharon answers ...it's Lisa.



Lisa
I'm sorry we running late is he there yet?



                                                          Sharon
No not yet? We Waiting on the Dr. to call ...Wait a minute he is calling now. Hold on!


                                                           Aunt Ethel
Hello..huh huh ok yes ...thank you much...(pause) Tim is not the father !!


                                                           Sharon
That Little bitch!! She said she was a virgin


                                                            Tim
( looks of disappointment) He is not my son??


Sharon
Hello Lisa are you still there?


Lisa
(Nervously)Yes


Sharon
The test proves Tim is not TJ's father.


Lisa
Wow really?
Is that what he calls himself?


Sharon
Yes,  who the hell is his father Lisa?


Lisa
I don't know you are right I slept with another guy the same night I slept with Tim. Someone I met in the bar and I never saw him again. I can't remember his name. We will be there soon ..bye


Lisa and Sharon hang up then Lisa turns to John


John
What do you mean he's not Tim's son?


                                                           Lisa
Sharon says he wasn't according to the phone call Aunt Ethel got from the Dr.


                                                         John
Do you believe her?


                                                         Lisa
I just want to see my son baby.


                                                         John
Ok just let it be for now. We know her ass is lying but for Tj sakes we going to do this happy family shit.



                                                             Tj
Hello...


                                                       Aunt Ethel
Come here baby I want you to meet your family. This is your Aunt  Sharon and your Uncle Tim


                                                             Tj
( looks at Tim) Am I named after you?


                                                        Sharon
Yes sweetie you are.


                                                            Tj
How are you my aunt?


                                                        Sharon
I am your mother's sister


                                                            Tj
How come you didn't bring my mom. Didn't she want to see me?


                                                       Sharon
Of course sweetie. She just running a little late she will be here soon.


                                                            Tj
( smiles) Really?


                                                        Aunt Ethel
Of course my love.


Bob and Linda enters the room.


Aunt Ethel
And here is your Uncle Bob and Aunt Linda. Bob is your mother's brother


TJ
WOW... Cool!! I got 2 uncles do you guys like playing catch?


Bob
Of course


Tim
Hey let's do it tomorrow if it's ok with your mom


TJ
Where is my mom?


The door bell rings


Lisa
Hello word on the street is my son is in here!


TJ
Mom?


Lisa
Yes Timothy come give your old mom a big hug!


TJ starts crying


TJ
How come you never come to visit  me?


Lisa
I was so sick...I'm so sorry


Lisa starts crying


Lisa
I love you so much We are all here to welcome you to the family.


Tj
Where is my dad?


Lisa
He is out of town. Aren't you hungry Aunt Sharon ordered pizza lets talk over dinner I'm starved


It is now Sunday everyone is leaving John and Lisa stay behind.


John
We need to talk to you about Aunt  Ethel's little white lie.


Sharon
What the hell are you talking about ?


John
Lisa was a virgin when she slept with Tim


Sharon
But Lisa on the phone...


Lisa
I didn't want to mess up TJ's weekend


Sharon
( starts yelling)You make me sick! What is wrong with you.?


Tim
(runs into the room) what's wrong baby


Sharon
They claiming Auntie lied about you not being Tj's father.


Tim
Call her right now!!


Sharon launch at Lisa and grabs her hair throwing her to the ground screaming I hate you. Then she begin kicking her until Tim manages to grab her. Lisa not once tries to protect herself.


Lisa
( crying) I'm so sorry how was I supposed to know you will fall in love with my son's father


John



Scene 2


Lisa and Sharon hangs up the phone and Lisa turns to John.
                                                            John
What do you mean it's not Tim's son?


                                                           Lisa
Sharon says he wasn't.


                                                         John
Do you believe her?


                                                         Lisa
I just want to see my son baby.


                                                         John
Ok just let it be for now. We know her ass is lying but for Tj sakes we going to do this happy family shit.


                                                           Tj
Aunt Sharon do I have grandparents ?


                                                        Sharon
Sweetie no not any more they were in a fatal car accident last year.


                                                             Tj
How come I don't live with my mom didn't she want me?


                                                           Sharon
Baby please save all your questions for your mom then if you still have questions after you guys talk you can come  talk to me.



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